Jenthura

What is this I don't even

Edited! :D I really want to know what you guys think of the last few lines. It was a fateful day when the Congress of Man gathered for the last ...

“Just hand me that towel, will you?” This beginning is very abrupt. Your opening sentence should be something that pulls the reader in and makes them want to read more. ...

First of all: SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY! This chapter took me forever, but at least I managed, right? I’m going to save my comments about Violet’s death ( :’( ) ...

Hi, Adoxa..um..graph…er…Hi! :D I really liked what you’ve written, and really like the poem. However, I have a few comments and nitpicks… "Nothing Gold Can Stay," I read aloud to ...

I googled it. :D Seriously, the 'young' and 'writer' combination is WINS. :lol:

I tried this already for the YWS family B2 and PinkSherwater have, still need to finish it. >.< Also, if you do me, make mine a tigah. Beckiw, I think ...

Actually, Beil, it doesn't mean much. I totally suck at anime/manga . >w

How on earth did you get all that black? Did you waste fifteen ballpoint pens? Or have you worn you darkest pencil to a stub? ;)

Unfortunately, the Anubis/charcoalspacewolfman entity becomes confused about his/its identity and commits suicide.

Granted, instead, you showed him Friday the Thirteenth . I wish my little brother couldn't read.

How is that fortunate? ;) Unfortunately, the sword was Pundit, and he cleaved the world in twain.

"Nappy, you get down here right NAO!" :lol:

Or you could risk developing tongue ulcers and just say 'avatar'. But I suppose that could be confused with the movie. ;)

Unfortunately, the mystical sword mutates into a sentient being after getting soaked in the great beast's blood, and it turns on its wielder.