Jenthura

Ack! I can barly remember me Tiger days! :D EuropeanRelative

Banned for making a tyop out of typo.

You know, RH, the only problem I have with your story is accepting the fact that Daria has so readily agreed to go with the group on the shallow excuse ...

Rh, :lol:

Brothergermany

Banned for boy- wut? Oh. ;) Banned for feeling creepy.

Fortunately, that means they all won.

Hmm, it's really great, it introduces and explains both characters in a very short time. Kudos on that. However, it feels like an excerpt from something else, as though you're ...

Go away an come back later. I'm not speaking to yous right now. Other than those two mistakes, you did great! I love this piece so much I *liked* it. ...

Unfortunately, they're all leprechauns or brownies.

Unfortunately, I don't like this piece as much as your others. Let me explain why. The lighting on the hair is point one. You have one circle of light on ...

Unfortunately, it's you.

Banned for being a disturbingly cute elephant.

Granted, you wake up a million years in the future; all your friends are dead, and you have an 11-foot beard. I wish I could fix any machine perfectly.

Scary.