Jenthura

Banned for speaking for shadows. Shadows are creepy.

Banned for implying that we're eating roots.

Granted, but the points are cursed, and the person who donated them must get them back somehow, or be undead for the rest of his/her spectral life. I wish I ...

Woah, I didn't ven see that! I could've sworn mine was authentic. :? 6/10 Evil cats. :lol: I was punned by Dems. XD

Ahah! I recognize the dark leaf and flower brushes! :D Anywho, you're doing great, but the lineart seems to be lacking in the guy character. The hair is excellent though, ...

Hey, Xregion. You've got a nice story here, but it's not really 'Other Poetry'. Next time, be sure to choose the correct genre. Also, it's quite a wall of daunting ...

Hi, Einfachheit! You've got a long name that's hard to say, so be prepared to recieve a large number of nick names! :lol: Don't worry about mistakes in English, we're ...

Banned because I was inferring your implied implecations.

Granted, you are caught and eaten. Fortunately, your tormentors allow you to choose the way they prepare you. Sushi or roast? I wish this printer would start working NAO.

6/10 It's hard to read it with all the colors coming out at me. Also, it's a bit confusing with one underlined part and another that's just a link.

Fortunately, the sun came on a once-in-an-aeon epileptic swing, putting three thousand miles closer to earth, therefore freeing up all the frozen deadness.

Banned for implying we are moving backwards.

Like Pink said, I think the guy really detracts from the picture. However, I think you should cut him and the other person out completely. Like this:

Azi! This is amazing! About the only mistake I found was not yours. After and before (respectively) the places where the grandfather's actions take over the letter changes to talk ...

Granted, but so much rhyming crap makes the loon and buffoon run away with the balloon, leaving you on the moon dune with your runes, just as a falling meteoon ...