Jenthura

Thanks y'all, I'll work on it. Truly, it was meant to be the prologue for a novel, but I couldn't really decided whether or not to start it off with ...

Hi there! I will (try to) be your reviewer today! My corrections in CAPS. ...and the sidewalk entirely different concrete AN entirely different concrete? That would make it less awkward. ...

Swoosh, and it was gone. A silver flash raced through the dark forest at incredible speeds, startling any creatures it burst past. In the center of the impregnable comet there ...

Since I've never read Hunger Games, I have a hard time critiquing you on that, but I would go ahead with this story if you don't think you'll ever publish ...

The prologue to your novel was drawing, cliffhanging and short, perfect for a prologue. But this first chapter should be a bit longer (even though the help sectors tell you ...

I would review if I could, but many others have beaten me to the pessimistic, nit-pickety, perfectionist type reviewing I try to do,s o I can only say how much ...

By the by, this whole piece is entirely fictional: quite basically a satirical work on the protectiveness and complexity of Microsoft user manuals. ~Jenthura

How to Activate and Install your personal Exern Command Console. To start with, remove the Exern command console from the packaging and inspect it for damage. Any cracks, chips or ...