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Re: Sitting in Mamie's Kitchen
Well I must say that am impressed by your expression of memories (if they are, they certainly ring like such to me) or imagination. I know what it's like to ...
Nov 4, 2009 -
Re: horro leave me alone
Well, I can say this for sure: You're a budding writer. There were grammar and spelling mistakes all over this piece, but that's okay: get the story idea out of ...
Nov 2, 2009 -
Re: The First Hunger (X-Men Origin)
Not having seen the movies myself, I don't know what to expect nor what to criticise on cliched information or plagarism, but I can comment on the writing. While the ...
Nov 1, 2009 -
Re: 2020, such an imaginitive year.
Berlin - Survivor I looked back into the room below me and saw a turmoil of fighting humans and infected. A quick decision formed in my mind and I took ...
Oct 31, 2009 -
Re: 2020, such an imaginitive year.
Maybe, post in a few
Oct 30, 2009 -
Re: The Wishing Well
I, being Thai, can connect with you there on that point. The villagers and farmers here don't have wishing wells (barring the temples and numerous Buddha statues they pray to) ...
Oct 29, 2009 -
Re: The potato chip Odyssey
That's an awesome speech (you misspelled it) on how we're losing originality. I love how you described it in potatoes and then implied it in a human by that phrase ...
Oct 26, 2009 -
Re: The Belgrade Convoy
Thanks all for your compliments, thank you especially KikiSaysRAWR! (yes, I copied and pasted that) for your extensive review, I will edit vera, vera soon.
Oct 26, 2009 -
Re: 2020, such an imaginitive year.
Come on guys!!!
Oct 25, 2009 -
Re: Mr Wrong
Cool! What book? Anyways, great work, the last stanza was, by far, the best, seeing as how the rest of the poem didn't seem to match up to an meter ...
Oct 24, 2009 -
Re: The Belgrade Convoy
Crista leaned against on of the wooden beams that supported the inn porch. Her eyes were closed and her breathing was regular; for all the world it looked like she ...
Oct 24, 2009 -
Re: War Planet
Ahem, I would suggest giving an elephant more of information, seeing as how those things usually help bring in the crowds to your storybook. Perhaps, the territories of the Red ...
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: Bliss
Obviously I cannot give a full review to these lyrics without the music, but I can try, can't I? Anyways, Bliss is not a normal girl's name, so I'm speculating ...
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: NaNo Art
Does this mean you'll be doing the NaNoWriMo? Anyways, I'd totally love that...once I get the idea for my story straight...yeah. You see, it's been a while since I really ...
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: 2020, such an imaginitive year.
Berlin - Survivor Suddenly the warm coffee-and-donuts atmosphere was shattered by a bloody girl breaking into the room, screaming something I couldn't understand. Realizing that whatever she was freak
Oct 20, 2009
