Jenthura

Alright, I'm totally lost and confused, guess I'll leave. My char wasn't a strong one anyways, and I entered too late.

Sorry about the map thing: my photobucket has been acting strange lately. Anyways, if you can’t read the city names, then they are as follows: SIOLFOR: Dead-center of the map, ...

I'm sorry about the map problem, fixing...

Aside from various spelling and grammar mistakes, I can see a few things that confuse me. One is the closeness of the forest and the road. How could the animals ...

William - Dark Shift One step would put me into my freedom and future, but something held me back. Coward. "Shut up!"I screamed, grabbing at my head in a desperate ...

Thank you! Name: William Draeger Age: 16 Personality: Extrovert, emo if you will. Speaks only when spoken to –and not even then sometimes– and the little he says only hints ...

Siolfor Online A journey through a fake world A virtual world was created by humans, a place where the lost and despairing could forget their real lives and become new ...

“Hi there! I don’t often get visitors, please stay. “It’s really quite boring; being a life-maker, that is. I’ve watched wealth and fortune pass my subject by many times, he ...

I posted to the DB of this SB, saying I'd create a char, but I realize now that it's quite far on, could I still post here?

Hey there! I'd like to reserve a character; male to even out the ratio maybe. The whole thing has confused me, and I'll need to go over other characters, but ...

“How did I get myself into this?” Terik murmured aloud. “I should’ve just kept walking.” It wasn’t the first time he’d said that in his life, but it was definitely ...

Terik wandered through the streets of Seljik; hands in his pockets, jacket collar turned up against the frigid wind that blew up from the dirty sewer: he was the very ...

and blessed with the charm of one too . Too? Maybe you could just end it with 'one'. Her name , if memory serves right , was You need commas ...

Gaia smirked she could use magic too. I wasn't going to do nitpicks, but this sentence popped out at me for its awkwardness. Maybe: Gaia smirked THAT she could use ...

I would make you, except that most of my writing isn't very satisfactory, maybe later...