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Re: Siolfor Online [Dead SB]
Tanahú - COF Hunter Circle of fire Member? How could I have forgotten; surely my brethren wouldn't let me starve (or die) in a strange land: she wasn't going to ...
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: A New Hop in Clyss
I know that 'Faulk' is over-used, and I know it's all crap, but it Nano. I'm telling you to not tear it apart with your destructive criticism (I cringe at ...
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: Siolfor Online [Dead SB]
Tanahú - COF Hunter Cat? My mind spun over the possibilities. Had my thief changed his form? I'd heard of the skills of mages in the lower regions of Siolfor, ...
Nov 21, 2009 -
Re: Siolfor Online [Dead SB]
Tanahú - COF Hunter ((I'm switching to first person)) "Meditation. It is best done in the dark." I squinted at her, from both suspicion and the lack of light in ...
Nov 20, 2009 -
Re: Siolfor Online [Dead SB]
Tanahú - COF Hunter The sounds, smells and sights that greeted Tanahú were beyond any tale any wandering minstrel could have told at his village inn. There were merchants, and ...
Nov 18, 2009 -
Re: The Scarlet Ibis (revised)
Here's my nitpicks! >< We looked up to the willowy tree, a lovely flower of a bird hanging on a branch. It swayed slightly, trying to beat its wings. It ...
Nov 17, 2009 -
Re: We All Go Marching One by One
I enjoyed the death tone and darkness of the poem immensely. Have you ever read the book Night? By Elie...drat, I forgot, anyways, he was a Jew during the Holocaust ...
Nov 17, 2009 -
Re: Joaquin Vazquez
A rather nice piece for its cultural side. I understand a mouse-amount of Spanish, but you used simple words (thankfully) and I got everything except siento , what's that mean? ...
Nov 17, 2009 -
Re: One For Sorrow
I'm wondering why I didn't come up with that idea first...probably cuz' I've never heard the superstition. Anyways, it sounds like a great story, only you might have some readers ...
Nov 16, 2009 -
Re: Siolfor Online [Dead SB]
Alright, Siolfor Online is officially starting now. ((I know that relatives within the game seem a little far-fetched, but there was something I didn’t write into the first post. Most ...
Nov 16, 2009 -
Re: Nanowrimo Procrastination
Crista daintily sipped her cherry cordial and looked over the inn with pleasure. It was a windy autumn night outside with orange and red leaves constantly getting plastered to the ...
Nov 16, 2009 -
Re: Look at this guy...
Look at this guy. Can you see anything in his eyes? What story can you bleed form his emotions. Are any emotions shown at all? Is he hiding them? What ...
Nov 15, 2009 -
Re: A New Hop in Clyss
The squad shot out from the launching bay and circled slowly around the globe-shaped cruiser. The void was blacker than Terik had ever known it to be. Even the closest ...
Nov 14, 2009 -
Re: Siolfor Online [Dead SB]
Do we have enough players now? Anybody late? If not, I might just start...
Nov 14, 2009 -
Re: Siolfor Online [Dead SB]
Sorry about not posting my profile: I could'a sworn I'd already done it. Whatever, here it is. Name: Tanahú Age: 16 Status: Registered (Circle of Fire) Member - Soldier - ...
Nov 12, 2009
