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Re: Arabella (For now)-Prologue
I stood in the middle of the cold, brick building lifeless 'Lifeless' seems out of place there, I would say " I stood lifelessly in the middle of the cold, ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: Siolfor Online [Dead SB]
Tanahú - COF Hunter Captain? This wasn't what I had expected. Twenty centuries of a long line of chief hunters had installed a deep sense of pride in my heart; ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: Siolfor Online DT
So here's a pic of the map of Siolfor. And what will the itinerary be? I suggest leaving the northern-most cities for last, as we might want to do something ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: Siolfor Online [Dead SB]
I agree, only...*looks around, slightly embarrassed, and then whispers* how does one go about making a DT for a storybook?
Dec 4, 2009 -
Re: The Hunter - Prologue: His Prey
Good grief, this is really gruesome. I see no legends, no explanation to the bear-man, and really no reason for him to attack the girl. A little explanation on that ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Siolfor Online [Dead SB]
Tanahú - COF (Does anyone still remember what COF means?) Hunter The Sailor targeted honor and glory when speaking to me, and gold when speaking to the thief, but Mikera ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Siolfor Online [Dead SB]
**I'm all for the quest, I was gonna have Tanahú lead everyone to their deaths at the brink of the darkness, but that's a better idea. Chupatoasta, you're welcome to ...
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Story 1, Chapter 1
1. It does, but for one thing. The main character (I'm assuming a girl) speaks of 'he' in the beginning, then mulls over her memories of her brother, her father, ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: Thicker
His lungs would burn like skin against carpet. He kicked dirt and bits of wood into the murky ocean water as another gust of morning air swept through his shaggy ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: Siolfor Online [Dead SB]
Tanahú - COF Hunter The sailor left as quick as she came, and I grabbed the scruff of the filthy thief's black cloak before he could escape again. The man's ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: Siolfor Online [Dead SB]
Tanahú - COF Hunter I watched with growing interest and anticipation as the pir- Sailor introduced herself to the Siolfor guards and named us as he crew. It was with ...
Nov 27, 2009 -
Re: Green Trees Leap
Edited: So, it was based on the sound of the word and the idea it kinda expresses, and not on the actual sense or meaning. Green trees leap Over rovering ...
Nov 25, 2009 -
Re: Siolfor Online [Dead SB]
Tanahú - COF Hunter I was, for a moment, miffed and distracted by Mikera's comment on my unusual use for windows, but then I realized she was asking me my ...
Nov 25, 2009 -
Re: Siolfor Online [Dead SB]
**Feel free to create any legends about any of the characters. Of course, we'll all have to conform to each others' legends and stories, so be prepared to be flexible. ...
Nov 23, 2009 -
Re: 2020, such an imaginitive year.
This isn't right, why should such a great storybook die? It makes me afraid that my storybook isn't gonna live long: it's already showed signs of slowing down, heck, it ...
Nov 22, 2009
