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Re: Pon and Zi Fanfic work (prepare to be dissapointed)
Skins: Thanks! The last was actually my favorite too. Elinor. PM? Sure thing! The text was purposefully that way, since the originals were sort of that way. It adds some ...
Mar 27, 2010 -
Re: Pon and Zi Fanfic work (prepare to be dissapointed)
Lava: thanks! His eyes are empty because...well, I don't know why the original artist did that. But that's the way they are. It's strange that you pointed it out in ...
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: Unfortunately; Fortunately
Unfortunately, the Nazi Stormtroopers that crawled out of the massive metal juggernaut weren't nice.
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: Pon and Zi Fanfic work (prepare to be dissapointed)
Only recently I discovered the Pon and Zi artwork (surprisingly, through a little picture of Mo's) but I quickly fell in love. Granted, my work will not be half as ...
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: First Flight
These are the points that I thought need the most work. Throughout the draft, you err on the grammatical principle of creating a new paragraph after every dialogue segment. I’ve ...
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: Nate's Dead?! (A Storybook not to scare anyone)
We need a DT. Thing is, Lugia dropped down on us, the wires (which I compare to cobras) attacked me 'n guitar guy (whom my character doesn't know the name ...
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: Unfortunately; Fortunately
Unfortunately, there were atomic asparagus, which, after being ingested, turned the goat into a massive metal juggernaut.
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: Coming Soon: YWS News
Thanks for the replies, Nate. And I 'liked' this too!
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: Manga art
Hmm, the white dots in the eyes are somewhat distracting, as are the embossed edges. I suggest you work more on the shading, since the current shading makes it look ...
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: Nate's Dead?! (A Storybook not to scare anyone)
I spotted Naldaer and thought she might be able to help me out. *sigh* for the umpteenth time, I'll say it again: I'm not a girl, and neither is Naldaer. ...
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: Thrive
I'll join! Watch this spot for a profile.
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: Unfortunately; Fortunately
Fortunately, a goat happened to appear that loved eating said bunnies.
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: Nate's Dead?! (A Storybook not to scare anyone)
Agh, I can't believe I did that! Posted once and then left. I do, however have a good excuse...which nobody wants to hear...yeah. I'm back. Naldaer After the short excursion ...
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: Coming Soon: YWS News
How will posting work? Posting a new article will just be like posting a new story or poem. Nothing different there. Hmm, I'm not quite how that will work. These ...
Mar 22, 2010 -
Re: Unfortunately; Fortunately
Fortunately, the objects exploded into clouds of powder puff and bunnies.
Mar 17, 2010
