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Hey! pretty girl With the hazel eyes, Please don’t you ever cry. I know you’re scared, I know you’re sad, But everything will turn out alright. Don’t hate your body, ...

I like it. You should add more to it though. But it's really good. (=

This is really good. I like your display of emotions and how you tell the story. And the way you wrote it, it's epic. Best poem ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thank you so much for the comment. I guess it does sounds like a story. It's kind of telling my story. but I didn't go into details. My other poem ...

thank you. I appreciate it [=

Alright. I put in the question mark. lols I like the colorful bottom part. Very cool. BTW, thanks for the comment.

Her expression was blank, You couldn't see all the pain she was living day by day. No signs of her confusion About who she really is, No traces whatsoever Of ...

It's kind of like a question statement. I don't know if you follow me here because it's hard to explain. Anyways thanks for liking my poem. I appreciate the comment.

A ticking bomb ready to explode. A balloon so filled it could burst. An overwhelming feeling at the pit of my stomach Adrenaline rushing to my every vein Dangerous thoughts ...