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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Among all the Dead Things

    Hey Stella, Thanks for the review! "Orange hues" actually refers to the color of their skin, which was orange. I appreciate the rest of your comments, and I'll work them ...

    Aug 13, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Among all the Dead Things

    Hey Rachel, Thanks so much for your feedback! I was worried about posting in parts, because it can be a little disjointed that way. I know the beginning does seem ...

    Aug 13, 2010


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