JenofCal

Hey SkillfulAmerica, Your story sounds pretty interesting, but there are a few things to address in order to make it better. Firstly, the introduction is a little dull. I feel ...

Hey Rachel, Your story gave me chills, really, it did. I love the way you move from the physical to the spiritual, the way you tie it in with the ...

Alright, So I read a short story by a brilliant author, Katherine Vaz, called "A World Painted by Birds". I didn't think I could be anymore wowed by a story, ...

Hey Sophia, I, like others, was VERY intrigued by your story. You've created such lush prose, a fact that I believe helps in creating vibrant images when reading your story. ...

CSheperd, I really enjoyed this story. Although it's short in length, I feel like you captured the essence of a classic fable or fairytale. I thought the high fantasy aspect ...