JenofCal

Hey Stella, Thanks for the review! "Orange hues" actually refers to the color of their skin, which was orange. I appreciate the rest of your comments, and I'll work them ...

Hey SkillfulAmerica, Your story sounds pretty interesting, but there are a few things to address in order to make it better. Firstly, the introduction is a little dull. I feel ...

Hey Rachel, Your story gave me chills, really, it did. I love the way you move from the physical to the spiritual, the way you tie it in with the ...

Hey Rachel, Thanks so much for your feedback! I was worried about posting in parts, because it can be a little disjointed that way. I know the beginning does seem ...

Hey Everyone. This is the first five pages of a short story I've been editing for a few weeks now. I would've uploaded the whole thing, but I didn't want ...

Alright, So I read a short story by a brilliant author, Katherine Vaz, called "A World Painted by Birds". I didn't think I could be anymore wowed by a story, ...

Hey Sophia, I, like others, was VERY intrigued by your story. You've created such lush prose, a fact that I believe helps in creating vibrant images when reading your story. ...

CSheperd, I really enjoyed this story. Although it's short in length, I feel like you captured the essence of a classic fable or fairytale. I thought the high fantasy aspect ...

Hey Jagged! Thanks for the information. I'll definitely stop by the chatroom :)

You're welcome! I'm planning on posting it here after I do a few reviews and polish it up a bit. Still nervous about it, though. I really haven't let anyone ...

Oh, nice! I don't know if this helps, but I was watching Jimmy Kimmel the other night and he interviewed a family that had driven from FL to his show. ...

ReisePiecey, Jenn works fine (and I love Jeno! No one has ever called me that.) Yay for insomniacs and romance :D! It's nice to find someone else with the same ...

Hello everyone! :) I suppose I should start by saying I'm not really conventional. I'm probably the only person who enjoys ice cream at 3 A.M. after a successful writing ...