Jennya

I love your first poem and there isn't much i can say about it. Although I'm not an expert. I quite like the repetition and it's general overall feeling. I ...

I quite like it. It does indeed have a very biblical feel but try to make the characters complex. Stories all ways get boring and annoying if everything is to ...

I quite liked it. Very intriguing. You know that something bad is going to happen and i love the suspense. Since its a prologue i think it would be sin ...

The most beautiful thing i have read for a long time. I seemed to captivate and drag me in. The poem was long and i usually don't like long poems ...

This is my first review so forgive me if it's not the best. I really loved your poem. I have to agree with the others, although it was long it ...