JennyK

I would like some honest opinions on this....

He wouldn’t stop crying. He was so sad. I had to go help him. I walked into my parent’s bedroom and saw him sitting on the floor crying in his ...

I think it has an unobvious meaning and made you think which I liked. I think it was too plain though. I think you should be more expressive emotion wise. ...

You are very descriptive, in a good way. Reading that I could picture the setting and feeling. I do think Leo's calmness as a little unrealistic. I would think if ...

I really like how you put something that is so true in reaslity into such a vivid description. I could see the images as i read it. In my opinion ...

I thought it was beautiful.