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Re: Red Balloon
Your poem is haunting. I like the part about ailing children and smog and forests and things. But I agree that the last line seams a little out of place. ...
Jul 1, 2005 -
Re: This I Promise
Wow.. your poem is SPECTACULAR!!! I absolutely LOVE IT!!! I really like all the imagery in it. It gives a picture almost. I love dark poetry.
Jun 30, 2005
