Jennafina

I just made a ton of changes! Thank you so much, guys. I kept the 'baby' thing, but only until I can think of a better word. Gal, I look ...

Hey, Conrad! Thanks for the critique, and I'm really glad you like it. I'll see what I can do about when they first meet to make it less confusing! JP, ...

Haha, guys? Anything? :)

Yeah, it's from personal experience. Thanks for the review. How would you suggest I change the spacing?

Thanks so much for the critiques, especially Gal's. I'll make revisions soon. (It's kind about anorexia nervosa.)

I think this should be stickied. :D

Edited! Chocoholic, Mr. Benedict is a cook on the captain's ship, so he is a servant. Thanks a lot for the great review: I tried to fix all the parts ...

Thanks a lot for the critiques! (It would be cool if you could be more specific, though. ;)) What I was going for here was not a full plotline, more ...

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*Locked* Artsygirl, if you change your mind and would like to put your story back up here, just send me a PM!

Moved to Fantasy Fiction. :)

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Hello! Please copy and paste your story here. It'll be much easier, and you'll get more reviews. I look forward to seeing it! Jenna

You might want to title this something different than the other chapter. (Like Rain part 2 or something.) On the fromt page and the posts since last visit list, you ...

The same book is being discussed here.