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Re: Dying.... revised again...
This made me think about dying. Now Im all paranoid.. :p My favorite part is this In my naive bubble, I bet between cancer and old age. Ironic... I never ...
Jul 6, 2005 -
Re: Ripped and Rubber Hands
Wow, your writeing is really, really amazeing. I love your writeing style. Especially this We all think of these spectacular ways to die, to end our time. In the end ...
Jul 3, 2005 -
Re: A Place Outside Time
I really like the poem, it feals heartfealt, but I'm confused. Are you talking about your boyfriend? or your mom? There are times in this pale house While you're out ...
Jul 2, 2005 -
Re: Mouth-Water Laffetty Taffetty Cult
I liked this peom a lot, this part was my favorite. The heartbeat of a strummer’s bass-line delight the wrinkling anticipation that caused us all to fade with you behind ...
Jul 2, 2005 -
Re: Dream
The poem seamed like it was describeing someone elses life, and was a little unclear. I did like how it flowed though. It had a nice ring, almost like a ...
Jul 2, 2005 -
Re: The Sundial
It is most definately worth continueing!!! I love the lump. I just want to hug him! Jasper seems like a cool charecter too, I love how she's not all perfect. ...
Jul 1, 2005
