JennaLL

Hello there, Does anybody know how I can cancel my account? Ta.

Ok well thanks for the comments; (“Where are you? I need to meet you”) - About putting punctuation after "you", I was told I was advised not to, so I ...

Thanks for the advice

Thanks KJ

I know I'm only a novice but I really enjoyed reading this poem. It flowed really well in a lively manner and this was due to the great rhythm and ...

The actual story is pretty poor but I quite like some of the description.

I wrote this a couple of years ago for a school assignment. One of my teachers was rather impressed. I hope you enjoy it and please leave some honest feedback/suggestions ...

Eimear, Thanks, that's not harsh! That's honest. The idea just got me writing and I understand it needs a large amount of re-structuring. Your tips can help me to focus ...

I really like the simile "like yoga" and I think the repetition of this is what keeps the poem together. I also liked the imagery of "bathing in a deep ...

This poem is really poigniant and the imagery is very powerful. I love the idea of the changing person and the rust underneath. It's great!

I really liked your description. I thought this story was very good and the concept was unique.

Walls The hostile harshness of the Wall was threatening The faces glared Sneering at me Him lying beside me Told me to crinkle my nose To contort my face To ...