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  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Needles and Roses - Chap. 1 (Edited)

    I think it was really great. There were only a few problems that I came across. One was punctuation. Somewhere in there after a short sentence, (about 15-20 words long), ...

    Apr 24, 2008


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