Jen_Li_Ha

Dear Mother. I have finally received sometime away from this horrible war, and yet it never seems to be that far away, how is Dalia, still having that awful cold? ...

as the Vicar said "This place is far from holy, all is cursed and belongs to the wicked." in other words, this church is not blessed by God, so it's ...

thanks sweetheart it helps alot with those grammar checks, since english ain't my first language :wink: and no worries, sir knight likes attention so of course he will get some, ...

Same as the other 2 parts.

hmm I like this story. But there's something with the dialog that gets me slightly light headed, I don't get caught by it, but it could just be me, got ...

It's nice to see that you can make so few sentences into something so deep and mysterious. I really liked it :D

But my dear friend, what you just mentioned about the servant makes me happy, you're a good reader and I, well i'm a teaser. I want my readers to think, ...

aww I found this story really cute (If it was not meant to be cute, don't hate me..!) :roll: and such lovely names :shock: just adorable! :D keep it up ...

Same as the other 2 parts. (Would be nice if someone simply deleted them completely, would love that! ^^)

oh boy, you're insane! :shock: I'm so super happy for real, so writing that would be easy, in a boring way :wink: I want to write dark stuffs, because it's ...

oh my, never expected to get this much feedback :shock: thank you everyone and I will have a little look at some grammars and such and maybe fix it up ...

oh my, you made me giggle a bit. :wink: I know that it might sound a bit over the top, but this man is so powerful that he actually rips ...

I'm afraid that I'd have to remove this if I want to get it published and not 'stolen' though I have copywrite... anyhow, thanks for the replies and feedback, it ...

I loved the beginning, a abit dark and mysterious :twisted: And I won't bother with grammars and such, because I still understand what you're telling me with this so... thumbs ...

Chapter 1: Lost. Lent Pacer woke up early in the morning, as he always did, ate his breakfast, put his clothes on and got prepared for another day at work. ...