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We can all hang up our hats now and sit back, Shall has this writing thing down to a science. The ebb and flow of it, it's a perfect balance ...

Hi neighbor! This was a pleasant read with how much character was put into it! There was a subversion from the typical lost lamb type character, yours wants answers and ...

Why must you take these esoteric ideas and put them into words? You did a marvelous job and I think the format really added to it, not sure why but ...

This was a fun read to harken back to all those sleepless nights of self-loathing and regret. I'm my own greatest demon but things have been better over all the ...

This is the bittersweet tragedy that really resonates with a lot of us. It's tough to say which one of us would be the writer if this was from my ...

I remember having the same headspace, the cold is so much more reassuring than being soaked. A side of why you don't relate to the rain would really enhance the ...

Certainly action packed! I would encourage more detail as things settle down, more break up between things happening. Fights are allowed to be a blur in my eyes but actions ...

Ahhh! What a good build up! Hope your night is going better than your characters! With this conclusion, I imagine the grandmother wasn't a sweet lady and her mom and ...

That was really beautiful for the simplicity of the content. I wanted to bust out my painting equipment and create this image you created! Thank you for reminding me of ...

I got a kick out of this one, I relate to the coach, I teach kids and instead of running I make them do jumping jacks. You can walk a ...

Yvie's motivation interests me now, especially with the cliffhanger at the end! A little more info on their first class professor would have been nice, this one part about his ...

The one major set of feedback for this part is the tonal switch. The prelude should set the tone for what's to come, if you're trying to be orthodox. Despite ...

You did wonderful with your flow of ideas! Each section had a point and hit it! You're experiencing something most people get in college: that longing to have better spent ...

I remember feelings this way in college and hating it. I don't hate much but when I do, I dive into it with that rage and fight my way through ...

Just off this I'm interested! I just watched The Saga of Tanya the Evil and it also is a fantasy world set during a world war, worth the watch! But ...