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I think your story was okay, but there are a few things you perhaps need to improve. I felt little sympathy for Con when the Oracle died. I suggest you ...

I think this could be a great story :) What I liked about it was the drama, it's really tense and I loved your description. My favorite line is, 'She ...

Hi, I'm Jen. I write fantasy novels for young adults and children. I'm having a book edited at the moment and hopefully will be sending it to some publishing houses ...