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JemimaPuddleDuck

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Pretense of Nature

    beautiful

    Jul 12, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: poem

    I like your idea, but you need some description and imagery. Make it seem more natural and subtle :-)

    Jun 24, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: By a magic tree, we stood and hoped.

    I like it - but could you make some lines a little shorter for dramatic effect? just a suggestion

    Jun 12, 2009


Cheat your landlord if you can and must, but do not try to shortchange the Muse. It cannot be done. You can’t fake quality any more than you can fake a good meal.
— William S. Burroughs