JemimaPuddleDuck

okay. I changed it a little but you don't have to listen to me :-) I’m the person in the shadows; the one that no one knows. Hidden by the ...

A shadow of his former self: his body weak; his mind still strong as ever. Days spent in one room are whiled away with idle dreams. He climbed a mountain, ...

well alice :-) this is my favourite one and i like it better than all the others i like it better than that crying girl with the wonky face and ...

The sun will rise again, it will: tomorrow morning, in the east. The clock will not stand dead and still; time will trudge on, the way it has for centuries, ...

ok It's me again sorry. I read the first bit bt that's it and i need to write this so that they can say i've done a review and i ...

well i found you :-) you'll be able to guess who i am i'm thinking hehe (look at my name isn't it fabulous) and i decided to actually see what ...

I like it - but could you make some lines a little shorter for dramatic effect? just a suggestion