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Jelly

  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: OBSIDIAN: A Tale of Africa

    That's really true, about the lack of fantasy stories set in Africa. And this one seems to be set on being seriously awesome. The detail works well with the size ...

    Jun 28, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: But Here, Winter's Never Anything But Over

    I kind of like how the prompt was about a football player which you Incorporated without making it about football. Your style is really nice, it's realistic and believable without ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Martha

    This is so sweet and sad. I love the end especially. I have to compliment you on the rhyming simply because I can't rhyme for my life. "some days there ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Alpha's Book Cover Contest Entry

    Firstly, it is very awesome looking. You might want to reconsider the spacing of the bigger circle-emanating-rays because it looks a little awkward, especially in the smaller view. Being under ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: April Showers

    The other daffodil drawing I ended up finishing. Marker, printer paper, and watercolor. Yeah. Watercolor on printer paper. I'm not sure how I can explain that reasoning right there.

    Jun 27, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Need Reviews Urgently, Please!

    I actually think this is great, I mean, I've never really put down why I write, but some of your statements make me wonder whether you've read my mind. You ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Words Understanding Everything

    I like how the timing's set up, and it seems like an interesting premise for a story so far. I particularly liked the numbered days. I'm unsure whether to advise ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Scripts Re: Forgetful.

    That was really funny, awesomely original, very cute, and the right amount of sad. I love it.

    Jun 27, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Fairytales

    Note: This is my telling of a couple Chinese stories my parents told me. I don't know very much about my heritage, but at least I have this. Happily ever ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Other Re: Imagine This

    Funny, how many times I've imagined this. xD Beautiful and simple. I love it.

    Jun 27, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Carly with no Daddy

    I remember this.

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Other Re: Daffodils

    My road is its own quiet shoe box world, blue sky prettily painted delicate and solid across the cardboard lid of the box, light that filters through little construction paper ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • General Articles Re: 13 Days.

    If a person counts, then yeah. I'm not seeing them for a month. :\ Anyway, this also reminded me of those dystopia novels that always have you questioning whether anything ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • General Articles Re: The Trichotomy of Me

    A good deal indeed. I've often heard people speak/write about feeling like they're split. I find it especially interesting when they speak about "developing" that personality. I have three main ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Firelight

    Drawing of a daffodil from this spring, black marker on printer paper + fiddling around in photo viewer editing.

    Jun 27, 2011


He who knows only his own generation remains forever a child.
— Cicero