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Re: Kurt
I really enjoyed this. I like your take on time-travel. The alternate realities and what-not are always full of plot holes of mind-boggling proportions. I thought it ended at a ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: Rum-Runners
I really liked this. Characterization was awesome, as were the voices. I can so easily see all three of these boys existing. And I might have developed an illogical attachment ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: Greetings, Earthlings!
I'm cool with that.
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: Writing Exercises
Mwahaha, horaay for my evil spread of generator sites! Ahem. I mean, I'm glad you made use of the site. It's awesome, isn't it? The Reunion: I liked the narrator's ...
Jul 9, 2011 -
Re: Light
Woah... awesomely, awesomely good. Officially jealous of your plottage skill. Of course, I'm jealous of everybody's plottage skills, but that's neither here nor there. I liked how it was a ...
Jul 9, 2011 -
Re: The Soul Supplier
Hi. This is nice and has an interesting idea behind it, but you have some grammatical errors and skipping around in tenses. I'll note everything that I've picked up, but ...
Jul 9, 2011 -
Re: The A Team
This fit both the emotion and the song really well. I liked the beginning and how it made me wonder what was going on at first. Its length is fine ...
Jul 9, 2011 -
Re: Places You'll Go
A couple of my favorite photos taken during two trips of this past school year. Washington DC: 174.JPG 069.JPG 169.JPG 168.JPG Quebec: 002.JPG 062.JPG 061.JPG 107.JPG 139.JPG
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Stop The Abuse.
I really like the idea behind this, and I think it shows pretty clearly. You can totally ignore my crazy nit-picking mania, which starts past this point. Alright, the shape ...
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Out With Magic
I like this, the descriptions are nice (particularly the first paragraph) and I'm looking forward to reading more if you post it. It's an intriguing first look, what with character ...
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Ink
Note: I adapted some bits of writing for the 100 themes challenge into a single piece. Then I was like bam, I want to submit this to the Creative Anything ...
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Greetings, Earthlings!
Hi! Haha, thank you. Unfortunately I can't credit myself with the awesomeness, it was the work of a friend of mine. xD Oh fantasy. I've been trying to get myself ...
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Simplicity at it's finest.
Hi. I really like this poem. The simplicity of the style matches the subject so well. One thing, in the first lines of the first two stanzas, wouldn't the verb ...
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Greetings, Earthlings!
:D Thanks for reading, I honestly wasn't expecting anyone to. xD Oh Gathering Blue is very good too. :) Have you heard of Messenger? It's the sequel that ties together ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Night of Perfection
*stares* I'm trying to come up with things to say. Wow. I love this. It's beyond beautiful. Really. The imagery is lovely, vocabulary is fantastic, semantics are perfect as far ...
Jul 7, 2011
