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  • Serious Discussion and Debate
    Re: Fanfiction?

    I mean, everyone here keeps saying that fanfiction is useful as a writing exercise for beginners, and I agree, but it's not solely for novices honing their skills. I know ...

    Aug 7, 2012

  • Serious Discussion and Debate
    Re: Fanfiction?

    I really like fanfiction. It's an awesome way for fans to respond to whatever media they love. I think contributing to a fandom is a more thoughtful and fulfilling way ...

    Jul 6, 2012


  • This isn't the easiest story to follow but I like that to some degree, as it forces readers to pay more attention and read slowly. Same with the lack of ...

    Sep 21, 2011

  • Lyric Poetry
    Re: Garden Of Words

    Hello there! I am here, if you hadn't guessed, to review! And review I shall! Very late, but who really cares? First I want to point out some phrases that ...

    Sep 14, 2011


  • "Everything is falling, and I don't know where to land." Today I remembered a song that I've heard. I recalled the memory of the first notes, tentatively fluttering down before ...

    Sep 13, 2011

  • General Fiction Novels
    Re: The Space Between Infinity- 1.5

    Hello! I like the switch in perspective here because we get to learn more about Chloe, Tyler, and their relationship. I also liked how the reader is left wondering who ...

    Sep 11, 2011

  • Romantic Short Stories
    Re: Eyes.

    Hm, I'm not actually sure how I feel about the ending. Part of me is like, "Yay, they got together, I'm happy as a clam!" but another found the corniness ...

    Aug 25, 2011

  • Action/Adventure Short Stories
    Re: What a Wonderful World.1 [deleted]

    I like the idea here and how it was written. I'm really looking forward to more! The characters were nice, I can't say more because it's the first chapter, but ...

    Jul 26, 2011

  • Art & Photography
    Re: [Mono] Chromatic

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    Jul 24, 2011


  • The sky’s summerblue with simmering dust. All the days are melding together, a cerulean age of phone calls and memories, of sunshine and scraped knees and you’re-not-here. Hair’s rolled up ...

    Jul 20, 2011

  • General Fiction Novels
    Re: Pornography Kiss (chapter 1)

    *dramatic theme music* Hi! I'm here to review! On the subject of being appropriate for the website, I mean, it's rated 18+, so I'm not seeing a problem. I don't ...

    Jul 20, 2011

  • General Fiction Novels
    Re: Live Ten (Prologue & Chapter One)

    Oh this will be fun. >:D I love the story idea. The style is nice and works well with the plot and premise. I like how you've set up the ...

    Jul 19, 2011


  • xD Ha, you're the third I've met so far. Being an Asian girl, I find this amusing beyond belief. And you wrote this two years ago? Wow. I don't really ...

    Jul 19, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: wind swept

    Hi. I like the formatting and simplicity of this poem, as well as the rhyming, In the first phrase if the first stanza, I think you meant "swept" and in ...

    Jul 15, 2011

  • General Articles
    Re: An Evening with a Vegan

    The first words that come to mind (after wow, of course) are startling and familiar. I love all the observations you have. I found them familiar without ever consciously thinking ...

    Jul 11, 2011


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