Jelen

This is an interesting story, in that it's very straight forward, and I think the beginning of your plot is very strong. I rounded the corner, back to the block ...

I really like this a lot. It flows exceptionally well, and I think you have a good sense of your own speed throughout. I hit a few snags, which I ...

Well, I'm Danijela (Dani is fine, or Jelen). That might be all I have to say about that. Haha I'm a mechanic from Kosovo studying to be an agricultural engineer. ...

This is fantastic. You have a definite affinity for dialogue, and it shows here: everything is very natural, and the whole story is very concrete. My only issue, as a ...

My first review here, so take it all with a grain of salt, if you would. Also, if you could excuse any language difficulties...English is not my native tongue! I ...