Jelen

Banned for living in Lousiana!

Aw yay! Reviews! JaneAusten , thanks! I love that verse, and I'm glad that you got something out of the story. It was interesting to write. sargsauce , haha thank ...

I like "comfortable," but only because I can't say it correctly. It comes out all jumbled, like "comfort-able." Naturally, I use it in casual conversation as much as possible.

So I’m in North Bend Hospital cleaning out the bed pans of dilapidated grandmas and dropping hunks of near frozen apple sauce into half-comatose patients when—wait, I should probably tell ...

Eh. This is my first story in English in a long time, so please feel free to point out any spelling/grammatical errors that I have made (I'm sure there are ...

Well, I talk to my characters, if that counts. Especially when I can't get them to do what I want....

Banned for having exactly 5000 points!

The stanzas and rhythm that you use here make this read more like a story and less like a poem. It is very difficult to find a cadence here, and ...

I have a Word document on my desktop titled "Garbage." I write in here for the first five minutes of every writing session. It clears out all the stale ideas ...

I…well I thoroughly enjoyed this. You are an excellent writer, and in my opinion everything from here on out hinges on your plot. Keep it unique and interesting and you ...

Although I am intrigued by the idea of a story such as this—using a perspective that is not traditionally presented—I think you should be very wary of the level of ...

Reason for writing: To understand. To me there has always been a certain unpredictability about life: little things are always slipping through my fingers. But writing them down lets me ...

Haha indeed! Well you'd better get writing. I can't wait to see how it turns out!

This is only the bare beginning! It is well-written, certainly, and although it is a relatively generic start, you have some excellent imagery here, it has some real potential. Do ...

You have approached this issue extremely well. Cutting is something that is usually isolated in an emotional realm, but when it is presented that way, readers can more easily dismiss ...