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Re: Orion:The Conqueror (Part 3 Comments encouraged)
Inside the conference room was millions of people. Yet it wasn’t the people he was amazed at. It was the room. It consisted of million of seat studded in jewels. ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Ways of POPULARITY
Very Interesting! I just don't get the fact that in the start you talk of bad things, and at the end you talk of good. Are you saying everything at ...
Nov 23, 2009 -
Re: Orion:The Conqueror (Part 2 Comments encouraged)
Thank you Rubric for commenting on my last work. Anyway please comment and enjoy! Orion thought fast. He didn’t have a weapon, he didn’t have repellent. What should he do? ...
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: Orion:The Conqueror (Finally)
Well after I checked it all for grammar, and got someone to edit for me here it is, 1 The screams were unreal. The terrifying beast took one look and ...
Nov 17, 2009 -
Re: Stay in the Dark II
Ugh! People are so confessing! It's hard to believe I was every one of them. I'm glad I was turned into a vampire at such a young age. It's so ...
Nov 16, 2009 -
Re: The Silhouette
This is extreme! Great story just some minor touch ups, His chest was bare now, and it gradually rose up and down. His skin was pale and smooth, like a ...
Nov 15, 2009 -
Re: Coming to terms. (Glimmer)
Its so good it should be published! Just as Pink says, just a few touch ups. This is more what I call "Fiction" that Fantasy Fiction, yet with that tinge ...
Nov 15, 2009 -
Re: A Whispered Secret - Chapter 1 *Arrival* (Revised Chapter!)
Wonderful! Just talking doesn't mean you start a separate paragraph. :smt001
Nov 15, 2009