JediRex

Inside the conference room was millions of people. Yet it wasn’t the people he was amazed at. It was the room. It consisted of million of seat studded in jewels. ...

Very Interesting! I just don't get the fact that in the start you talk of bad things, and at the end you talk of good. Are you saying everything at ...

Thank you Rubric for commenting on my last work. Anyway please comment and enjoy! Orion thought fast. He didn’t have a weapon, he didn’t have repellent. What should he do? ...

Well after I checked it all for grammar, and got someone to edit for me here it is, 1 The screams were unreal. The terrifying beast took one look and ...

Ugh! People are so confessing! It's hard to believe I was every one of them. I'm glad I was turned into a vampire at such a young age. It's so ...

This is extreme! Great story just some minor touch ups, His chest was bare now, and it gradually rose up and down. His skin was pale and smooth, like a ...

Its so good it should be published! Just as Pink says, just a few touch ups. This is more what I call "Fiction" that Fantasy Fiction, yet with that tinge ...

Wonderful! Just talking doesn't mean you start a separate paragraph. :smt001