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Re: A Face by Many Names
It is quite an interesting poem because you had a distinct message. The fact that you said what you wanted to say by putting it through how God (or your ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: this is what happens.
{ I only ask that you do not reply by criticizing weed in general. Thank you. } One person. Two people. Countless hits. One drug. A green leaf. A little ...
Oct 19, 2008 -
Re: My friend. Do you know??
I am a fan of the repetitive nature of your poem. I often use repetitive phrases in order to emphasize. It also gives the poem a type of rhythm. Also, ...
Oct 19, 2008 -
Re: Confused
I know what it's like to be confused and to have so many questions. I'm new at this; your poem is the first one I am reviewing! So, forgive me ...
Oct 19, 2008 -
Re: How did you find the Young Writers Society?
One of my good friends told me about this page. I've been writing a lot lately and I wanted to share it with people, so I decided to create an ...
Oct 19, 2008
