JdoggyGirl

First off, I love the exchange between an older, grumpy, experienced bird and a young, innocent, hyper bird. It’s so adorable! Near the beginning, I think you could work on ...

First off, I would like to suggest capitalization and proper punctuation as well as spacing in between commas and different paragraphs. It goes a long way in first impressions. After ...

Oooh, i really liked this one! It showed the beauty of nature, and the bad effects of climate change and littering all at once! First off, i would like to ...

This reminds me of a scene in this one book we were reading in school called "Tuesday's With Morrie" where this phenomonally well liked teacher comes into his college classroom ...

This was very well written! I love that little exchange from Malia with the main character, it was just clear that they had inside jokes together, and had several things ...