JazzberryJam

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I liked the first three Twilight books. I thought that they were very entertaining. They don't have any universal messages to be gained from them, they're not particularly literary, but ...

Sabriel by Garth Nix :)

"Heartthrob lost his touch?" "22 year old heartthrob Drew Brandon doesn’t seem to be living up to his reputation as "The Heartbreaker" these days. In fact, sources say he has ...

This is for my English assignment. I have to write a short script of a scene about anything. This script was actually inspired by my English teacher herself. I've never ...

'Twas nightfall in the kingdom of Xarifaa where young elf Tristan was stealthily climbing into a grubby unlocked window to William's Gemstone. The biggest thing that could be improved in ...

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I really like your writing style, but the story reminds me of a really bad one I read back in my Quizilla days.... I just came from Quizilla too! And ...

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I think that if you're going to write a story about Greek mythology, you should actually stick to the actual gods and goddesses for the most part. I can see ...

Wow! I think it's awesome that you chose to do an acrostic poem! I definetly agree that more punctuation is needed, but I love the message of the poem. It ...