Jaz

I like it. :) I'm not sure I understand it... but I like it. ~Jaz

the dirtiest grey anxiousness like rubber but crawling screeching your name a melancholy taste paranoia the blues the blues whispering but hostile locked and not sheltered a murky deranged white ...

Hello, Jaz. I am glad to say that I will be reviewing this today. As this is my first time reviewing, I hope I measure up to your standards. ...“ ...

I like it. Personally, I could not find anything wrong with it. For your concern, I thought the gender was confusing a bit, but when I saw 'Aaron' and 'wife' ...

We rarely mention our wives, less so our children. I, personally, can’t bring myself to touch upon the prickly subject of everyday life, the mundane rituals that occupy my time. ...

This is good. Romantic in the sense of how you can use your body, the only thing you really possess if all else is taken away, to aid another person. ...

Whether or not there is a gene for something like homosexuality should have no effect on the way people are treated. It's sickening to think a parent would be allowed ...

I enjoyed reading this and forming the image in my mind of the abandoned building. Is it a church of some sort? If so then I think maybe there is ...

I Am Legend - Richard Matheson. The movie was a fun vampire blockbuster but I think the novel is much better. I wouldn't actually describe it as a story about ...

Very interesting but sad book. Has anyone read it? I wasn't particularly surprised by the ending and I'm not sure if I was meant to be completely shocked about what ...

I quite like this! The repetition and the way you tweak the sole word to really connect to the sentence its a part of and then have it link to ...

This is simple but heartfelt and I can relate to it. When I was quite young my brother moved away and I really wanted to ask how he could leave ...

This is beautifully written and quite frankly, a little disturbing, but I sense that's what you were going for. I think you write really well and I liked the sort ...

Think the above poster did a great job of pointing out grammar issues so I'll simply say well done! Bittersweet - you've captured the feelings of a (first) crush really ...

I usually really like carefully chosen detail in short stories like this but also appreciate the way that saying little is sometimes far more effective. What's left out allows readers ...