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Definitely. If you would, write me down somewhere and shoot me a PM when another chapter comes out. It's always hard to track these sorts of things down :D

That's cool. I liked working on a novel with my friend when he was available. I'll be sure to give WW some credit as well.

Uhm...wow...what was I thinking? DON'T READ THE ABOVE REPLY TO THE ABOVE REVIEW! AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!

Lol, I better go review some of your things. I'm going to struggle to make it as good as yours, though. And, I believe I have like 11 chapters so ...

Lol, I better go review some of your things. I'm going to struggle to make it as good as yours, though. And, I believe I have like 11 chapters so ...

Thanks for the review. You pointed out a few things that JamesHunt didn't see that I definitely will change, so it fits better. As to your question about the narrator, ...

I must say, I was not only pleased, but very inspired by your review. Sometimes I wonder if I'm a good writer at all, and I become depressed with my ...

Thanks for the review! This is Chapter 1, so if you'd like to read Chapter 2, here's the link Rifted - Chapter II - The Watchers

Wow, I'm actually quite stunned. I've felt that this was lacking in so many ways and would not appeal to the audience I'm shooting for, bit it seems as if ...

Well, I guess the only one you repeat is "growls" or other forms of it. I'm just weird like that :D

I'm relieved that my review helped. I worry every time I push the "submit" button that I've written something offensive or rude. And yes, I enjoyed reading it, and that's ...

I agree with you. I think I might look up the book.

Lol, that's the first time anyone has said that after a review. But it was an honest thank you. I really appreciate getting to read things from other, like minded ...

Wow, you are so smart!