JayandKay

LOL! Jack, you're amazing. About the responding to other critiques - it wasn't because this wasn't being praised, it was because I didn't agree with the reasoning provided. Everything that ...

This is getting silly XD. Without some degree of self-abhorrence, eh? I mean really, if you'd read the piece or put any effort into your review at all, you would ...

Snoink -- Thank you for the critique. Though perhaps things would make more sense to you if you actually bothered to spend any effort reading the story. It appears as ...

Hey Adna! Sorry you couldn't get through it! We know it's not exactly easy to get through - some of what we've tried is a bit out there - experimental ...