JayandKay

LOL! Jack, you're amazing. About the responding to other critiques - it wasn't because this wasn't being praised, it was because I didn't agree with the reasoning provided. Everything that ...

iv. At the kitchen table. Thin, steady drip of the sink, bottoms of my feet are itching, flies squabbling. Dizzy orbits. Hairy black bodies, engorged like nostrils. Tapping at the ...

This is getting silly XD. Without some degree of self-abhorrence, eh? I mean really, if you'd read the piece or put any effort into your review at all, you would ...

Snoink -- Thank you for the critique. Though perhaps things would make more sense to you if you actually bothered to spend any effort reading the story. It appears as ...

*Tentatively raises hand* I sort of asked first xD. In the chat yesterday! Thought I'd make it official, ma'am, yessum indeed. Cheerio

Hey Adna! Sorry you couldn't get through it! We know it's not exactly easy to get through - some of what we've tried is a bit out there - experimental ...

Title: Beast Genre: Other Fiction Things you should know: It's a bit graphic and fairly experimental in nature. Thanks!

It’s eating me. I'm sitting on the couch. As I sink deeper, I wrap my pudgy hands around the remote, glaring at the screen. I contemplate the monster. Sweat sticks ...

Hey! Ooer. This was indeed pretty fantastic. I hate that there's so much crap here that gets attention, while the good pieces get neglected. This is good. Very good, I ...

Hey! So, uh, this underwhelmed me. What-if's aren't exactly the most engaging material, even when used as a sort of side-note, but as the entire basis of any literary work? ...