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  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: Bigger On the Inside

    I really enjoyed this piece of work. The opening was brilliant. I especially enjoy the comparison of the girls mood to the weather. The ending made me laugh to myself ...

    Jul 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Politics, Horror Re: The thing about life

    I enjoyed the idea of how in life you want what you kind have like "when were adults we wish we were kids". I also like the hope in the ...

    Jun 27, 2015


Remember: when people tell you something’s wrong or doesn’t work for them, they are almost always right. When they tell you exactly what they think is wrong and how to fix it, they are almost always wrong.
— Neil Gaiman