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Re: What do you like to see in a book?
Thanks! I'm gonna post the story asap. I realized there's a lot of revising to do. I learned some new stuff in my amazing English class today! lol Anyway, keep ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Vampires
it's not really that I'm annoyed at cliches but I think you should write a story about a vampire who hates these cliches. Like they say that vampires don't die ...
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Re: Pen name?
that's a cute idea! Using my middle name and my moms maiden name would be really unique, but I really like the one I picked. rawrg! hard decisions now lol
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Pen name?
I have one of those names that will always be mispronounced in the most embaressing moments I don't think you should care about your name being mispronounced. Some people still ...
Oct 15, 2007 -
Re: My Prison
Your rhyming was really nice, and it made me happy, until the stanza with the "own.../...throne." The words just sounded forced into the stanza. The own/throne thing I can explain ...
Oct 14, 2007 -
Re: Writers Block?
This is kind of a fun idea, but it may take some time to establish. Get a pack of note cards. The type of them doesn't matter. (You can make ...
Oct 14, 2007 -
Re: Pen name?
I was thinking that I wanted my pen name to be J.T. Simms. The J is the initial for my first name, the T is the initial for my middle ...
Oct 14, 2007 -
Re: Tell me what you think.
It sounds like a great action adventure. For ideas, I'll try to help with those when I'm not tired but for advice. Remember to show and not tell. I have ...
Oct 14, 2007 -
Re: Rhyming in Poetry
Kk but in a nutshell. Writing a poem around words that rhyme makes everything seem forced and so-so. What I mean by so-so is, you want your poem to be ...
Oct 14, 2007 -
Re: My Prison
Thanks for the advice. I've never actually read poems about homes being prisons so I didn't know anything about "originality" This poem I honestly wrote in 5 minutes after reading ...
Oct 14, 2007 -
Re: Rhyming in Poetry
In my opinion, experience and from what I've seen. Rose and Closed would work. It's your poem, you do what you want to do. Yes you want it to sound ...
Oct 14, 2007 -
Re: My Prison
Do they feel bad for lying to me? Not telling me about the world Raising me up to put me down Running circles around my simple mind Hoping that maybe ...
Oct 14, 2007 -
Re: Writers Block?
So you've got this amazing story you're writing or want to write. You get the first word in there and then.... you draw a huge blank. Here are a few ...
Oct 14, 2007 -
Re: What do you like to see in a book?
Don't worry, all of that is already in the story. She has a best friend, who is a maids daughter. She tells her friend everything, which tells the reader everything ...
Oct 14, 2007 -
Re: Hiya!
Well my real name is Jasmine and I'm 15. I've been doing creative writing for as long as I can remember. When I first started playing with barbie dolls, I ...
Oct 14, 2007
