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Re: All and More
Hi! I think poems inspired by loved ones are very beautiful, and this one definitely is. The length is very nice because it's just enough to portray your feelings for ...
Aug 20, 2020 -
Re: Fly By Night
Hi! I really enjoyed reading this. The way you described the settings makes the reader feel fully in the airport, but also fully inside the character's mind. The way the ...
Aug 18, 2020 -
Re: Morning Dancers
Nice Poem! I really enjoyed the way the poem also 'pulled you' through the doors of the house. You also described the different smells very well. The only thing that ...
Aug 18, 2020 -
Re: Mar: Part 1
I really like how you started the story off with a flashback, then show us his friendship with the king and then why his voice was harsh and gravelly! In ...
Jun 17, 2020
