Jashael

Hey, Flower! Jash here as requested. First, I really don't have any nitpicks for this. The reviewers above probably did that for you. I'll just be giving you my overall ...

Hey, Idraax! This is not long. XD So no need to apologize. You should read my and Ignis' works. O_o XD Okay, here at last as request. Jashy at your ...

Hey, SilentRain! Jashy here as requested. Sorry for being so late. I had the reviewer’s block and I just wouldn't review anything. LOL As I was reading I remember you ...

Hey, Apple! Sarreh for the delay! I was supposed to be the first one to post here!!!! X(( But my mouse was glitching then. ARrggh...anyway, I'm here and I hope ...

Hi, Dad! =)) I'm here to review at last. “Kids, where have you been? I was worried!” s he called, turning to face us. “It’s raining like crazy outside and…look ...

Hi, Ignis! This has been in my drafts for awhile now. =)) She did not know what weighed it down so . I'm not quite sure what you meant there. ...

Hello, Miss Foxy! To return the favor, I am now here. =)) This is prose, right? =D/ And honestly, it's good. Though I do have some nitpicks for you: I ...

Hello, iGlamour! Thanks for the request. Jashy here at your service. Oh sure, no prob. I only get harsh at people who strike back at me for telling me my ...

Hello, Bondgirl! Jashy here as requested. =)) I've got some nitpicks for you: Aqua blue means pay attention. Pink means nitpick. Blue means, "Hey, it's better this way." A small ...

Hi, Jenny! This is the first time that I will be reviewing you. Thank you for the request by the way. I just don't know why you had to withdraw ...

Hey, Tiger!! RAWR! lol Jashy here as requested. =)) My nitpicks are in pinkish font . ~~~ Delete space between comma and zero. =) Did you know, I had asked ...

Hallooo, Ate Pink! Jashy here again to review. XD But there was a glint in her that shook my perceptions. “Hey, Luke…can we go now?” s he asked when I ...

Hello, Roal. Jashy reporting for duty! =)) First, since, like you said, you’re writing in present tense, all of the tenses should be—duh me—in present tense, unless you’re talking something ...

Hey, Ate Pink! I couldn’t wait to read this. LOL And frankly speaking, reading this didn’t change anything. As a matter of fact, I like Luke even more! XD Here ...

Hey, Spike! Jashy here as requested. But just so you know, I read your poem this morning but didn't have any time to review it yet. But now, I'm here. ...