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Jashael

Jashael

  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello!

    Hello, ayra! Nice reading that. It wasn't a rant, really. =P So I can see that you're more of an emo kinda writer? xD You're right about Cinderella and the ...

    May 15, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: hi..

    Hi, omenfairy! Wow, we've got the same hobbies! I love music, drawing, and writing, too. =) And oh, welcome to the site! :D

    May 15, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Medieval Girl 1

    Since I got a lot of positive feedback on another drawing I did, I decided to try and draw something with the same style. The main complaint on the other ...

    May 10, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Charcoal Drawing

    This is simply awesome! (I can see charcoal smudges on your hands. [LOL]) W-O-W. OK, let's begin with the review: Okay, first, I would like to compliment that the features ...

    May 9, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: The YWS Ship

    Yuriiko, dear! This is great! And I'm mad that you resized it. You should have posted another one in a spoiler, one that is the actual size. xD I have ...

    May 9, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Spiral-Horned Dragon Head Portrait

    SHINEY! YOU ARE SO TALENTED! This is really awesome. Wow... I'm shocked, surprised. This is simply amazing, and plus, you used a mechanical pencil! No, it's not a no-no if ...

    May 9, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Innocence

    Hi, Mickixoxo. Love the avvie. And wow, I can't wait to give this some comments. The first one, I really, really like. If you're having trouble with the cam, taking ...

    May 9, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Anime/Manga Drawing

    Hi, dearie. I've always loved looking at Manga and Anime myself. In fact, when I was a kid, it was the kind of drawing style I always did. This is ...

    May 9, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: An Unsent Letter

    NITPICKS | CHANGED | PAY ATTENTION | ADDED Helloooo, AllieMeadows! Here for a very quick review. Caught a couple of typos, I think: I love how you know when something ...

    May 8, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Madness During my Solitude

    NITPICKS | CHANGED | PAY ATTENTION | ADDED Hello there, Gheala. Here for a review. It's a good thing that you value each review you get. It is a very ...

    May 8, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Catch a Falling Star

    Can you catch a falling star in your hand? Can your thin fingers keep a hold of the grains of sand? Can you stop the hate that runs in our ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Parasite: The Corruptive Shadow - Chapter 2

    This line is a bit long. Maybe you could have just used a semi colon between saw and how instead of a comma. That would lessen any confusion this sentence's ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: Is this description plausible?

    What Phoenix said.

    May 7, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Sincerely, Brain

    Oh my, this is so cool! I love the quick lines. The only thing I'm not sure about is the separation of two stanzas. Maybe you could add a space, ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Friendship

    Some suggestions, and nitpicks as well: Lies, secrets, gossip s . Are these the words , Why words? They're ideas. But yeah, it's fine. (LOL) But I'll be serious now: ...

    May 7, 2011


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— Kaladin (Words of Radiance by Brandon Sanderson)