Jashael

The imagery is very good. It's a nice poem, talking bout an average day, eh? :) good job

Overall I thought it was pretty good. I've never heard a song about Emily Dickinson before. :) I didn't understand everything you said but that could be because I'm not ...

Isha, this is actually good! I do have ONE suggestion. Please describe the setting. You know...uh, did I miss it? I couldn't picture if the story took place in a ...

Hello, my name's Rosie, and I cannot talk. :P

Tonight INTRO Shut out Locked in You’re looking up But they push you down Helpless Powerless You try and try But you lose control VERSE As their choke hold fails ...

So, I wrote a poem last year, lemme guys know what you think. (and yeah, one thing...I put melody to it...so, yeah...you can listen to it while reading. ) HEre's ...

Ahhh! I can't remember when this was written, but I'm sure it was awhile back. I do enjoy that I actually wrote something pretty good in the past. Before you ...

I was always the smart one. The pretty one. The good one. Now, I'm the bad one. The blind one. The foolish one. I don't know if that's a good ...

First post :) Not really a poem person writing stories are more my type, but i wrote this memory poem and figured i post it. --------------- Soon after familiar tires ...

Oh, I see what you mean! Yeah, it does that. You just have to look through that forum to see which posts have been replied to - those are the ...

Hello there. I shall be reviewing you today. (: I'd like to start off with that there's nothing enormous that jumped out at me technically speaking. The choice of vocabulary ...

if you click the notifications link at the top, it takes you to the notifications page, and if you have any messages or other notifications, some of the words should ...

ok, I figured that out...can anyone help me with the notifications? It sys three messages but I can't see anything... sorry for the posts...I jsut need some help...I don't hink ...

I'm a newbie and I'd like to know how to edit my it possible to have an avatar?? Thank you very much...and any newbie and post their questions here. :)

Just a short story I wrote when I was in ninth grade... Hehe... My one and only short story though. I had a hard time doing this, why? 'Coz my ...