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Re: The Runner
THE RUNNER Feet thumping across pavement, His heart racing, lungs pumping. 'I'm Flying!' he thinks. Nothing can stop him now, He's Invincible! He is having the love affair he once ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: Spell Check
A poem I did for class. The idea was to prove in the poem that the narrator of the poem was clearly wrong, so I chose to do somebody who ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: (I'm) A Shadowed Girl
Hi, Nice poem. Just spotted one little thing: 'Coz Even if I diligently try I think 'Coz should be 'Cause. Because it just makes more sense. ;) Oh and I'm ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: True Love
Listen yall... "your" is slang not that, that matters because it doesn't. Poetry is the only exception to literary work that punctuation doesn't have to be applied. So for those ...
Oct 2, 2010 -
Re: Daddy?
Please pay attention to the red parts. :) I wrote this awhile ago, theres a few bugs still in it though... Look at me daddy look what I did. I ...
Oct 2, 2010 -
Re: True Love
The Lord above created you for me to love He picked me out of all the rest Because he knew I would love you best Take care oh my heart ...
Oct 2, 2010 -
Re: (I'm) A Shadowed Girl
Hello there... :) This is a sweet poem. I can totally relate to it first of all. The flow is great, the rhyming, where it's supposed to rhyme is not ...
Sep 30, 2010 -
Re: Manila Bay
Hey, guys! Thanks so much for the reviews. Here are a few more pictures. :)) This one's a bit weird. :P Hannah, I cropped the second picture actually, :)) here's ...
Sep 30, 2010 -
Re: Inner Beauty
Hello, guitargirl. (I love your name by the way) I'll be reviewing your short story for today. Here it goes... A pointless little thing that I've seen happen at my ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: Apologizing
Dear Hello Hey I'm sorry. Let's just get down to the point. I'm sorry that I fell so hard for you, and I'm sorry that I have to give you ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: Fifteen Years
Hello, Blue Africa, (may I call you BA? :) ) Yes, this sounds more of a prologue. Did you have any thoughts of writing it to a novel? It's good. ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: It's WickedWonder~
Alright, so I never did the whole welcome mat thing when i joined, three weeks ago, so a few facts ~I am a black girl! I posted a picture of ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: The story of me
It all started October 23rd, 1995, at 10:23pm My username is Bolt on this website. I have three sentences on my About The Author page. I am also now a ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: I Die
I dodge lightening bolts In a raging storm. I'm searching for shelter, For all around me is darkness. I'm running in a direction, One I can't identify. I'm screaming for ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: Hatred
Hatred Red, bloody Deep clenching Inside Anger Thrown in For a spice Chicken and rice No connection Yet the same I hate you I hate them I hate him, her, ...
Sep 29, 2010
