Jashael

Hello! I really like your drawings, though I think they're a bit crammed. :) nice work though.

A little copy of something I drew in class... I think the origional, hand drawn version is better, but my scanner isn't working. :/. Sooooo, here's the computer version, drawn ...

Mr. Lumi, I need some polishing again. Thanks! :)

To Write Love on her arms is a beautiful thing. She feels that she is wanted, That she is needed. Like she is an important factor in someone's life. The ...

I only changed two words from the original draft, which I spontaneously wrote. I was quite shocked at how these words just came out. It's very simple though. -----------------------------------------

This is a really old poem, not sure if I should change it or not... Rain drops there they're falling I can hear them Oh, I wish I could see ...

Hello, Charlotte! Jash here, and I'll be reviewing you today. :) Comments and nit-picks in pinkish font Love is suppose to be the best thing in the world, right? That's ...

Hello, Ray! As part of the deal, I'm here! LOL though I'm still a bit feeling sick from reading a poem (I think you know what I mean) Anyway, on ...

Boys here have lost girl's interest big time--unless she's a beyotch, like the theme character of the poem. Quite off-topic. Oh well, 'bout the poem. It's humorous how you've laid ...

I use--dun dun du-duuunnn >>A CELLPHONE!!! All of my first drafts are in my best friend's cellphone which I sent to her every time my cellphone's memory was full. But ...

Great poem. Loved everything about it. some of the rhymes were good. specially the got and lot part. in short, it was awesome. Thank you, NeoAnderson! :D/

I wish I could help, but I'm not very good with essays. I've never read an essay like this before, 'coz it sounded more of short story--Mark Twain? :D Anyway, ...

firstly i love that you haven’t edited; coz makes enough sense to me ;) this is a beautiful piece of writing even for a sixteen year old let along a ...

Hello, Yuriiko! No prob! :) I was laughing when I saw your post. I mean, man! Most of those errors weren't errors! They were mistakes. :| Anyway, yes. I will ...

Comments in pinkish font! :) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ They are empty of sorrow and abandoned by truth. A cheat to the bone an