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Re: In The Storm
He would never put me through something I can't do? Hey, Sol! Just a wee nitpick for you. Other than that, this was very simple and nice. ;) keep writing ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Make me....I dare you
Review please? =)))
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: Fire-bird chapters prologue and chapter 1
Heyowww! Here as requested. Wait. Seriously, Pointe? This is it? O_O It's so short! Anyway, nitpicks in pink font. Prolouge: He stood there , looking through the cracked glass of ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: Pointe2drama's will review :)
Hey, Pointed, I remember you telling me that you'll review back. so here it goes! I'm the second one? =) LOL =))
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: I Need to Review you! Puh-lease? O_o (OPEN)
ALL DONE! =)) Except for Point's novel, and Roal's Chappie... =)))))
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: deleted
What happened and you deleted this?! O_o What would you feel when you review another chapter and happily looks for the thread and when you finally find the thread--it's deleted? ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: YWS (parody of Y.M.C.A)
I love this so much LOOOOOOOOOOOOOL I keep on laughing while I was singing to your words. LOL yeah, there could have been better word choice, but so what?! :lol: ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Prologue)
Hey, Unc. Nephew here to review as requested. I was supposed to review this yesterday, but I forgot which folder I saved it in. *sigh* Anyway, how’s it going? I ...
Nov 18, 2010 -
Re: Fatal love
Hey, Point! Here now as requested. First, the reviewers above have pointed out the nitpicks such as missing punctuations and mispellings, so I won't bother repeating them. I'll just tell ...
Nov 17, 2010 -
Re: My Hero
Road! May I please request something before I continue my review? Can you please post it whole? I read that this is only the start. May I please read it ...
Nov 17, 2010 -
Re: The Lockets -- Chapter I
TIGER RAWR! hahaha... Honestly, I love your review, I've even altered my manuscript! BUUUUT some were, I'm sorry, but if I followed your advices on Yuenish's PURPLE PROSE...well, my character ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: Munera - 1
Hey, Bick. I'm back. =)) NITPICKS AND COMMENTS Correction. Pay attention. Better this way. >> A pack of rowdy young men always congregated outside them, and they enjoy ed throwing ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: The Lockets Book Trailer *NEW with screenshots*
Hi Jash. That was chilling to watch. I hope your novels match the epicness of that trailer. You can't imagine the anticipation I'm feeling right now :3 - Jai YAO! ...
Nov 15, 2010 -
Re: Do click on this topic, my red pen is impatient
would you please check out my portfolio? have a bunch of poetry! XD
Nov 14, 2010 -
Re: My Hero
ROADY! (haha I just gave you that weird nickname. so sorry, I'm not good with nicknames. =)) ) I'm here again! And thanks for the request! I'm excited to review ...
Nov 14, 2010
