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Jashael

Jashael

  • Other Poetry Re: In The Storm

    He would never put me through something I can't do? Hey, Sol! Just a wee nitpick for you. Other than that, this was very simple and nice. ;) keep writing ...

    Nov 19, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Make me....I dare you

    Review please? =)))

    Nov 18, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Fire-bird chapters prologue and chapter 1

    Heyowww! Here as requested. Wait. Seriously, Pointe? This is it? O_O It's so short! Anyway, nitpicks in pink font. Prolouge: He stood there , looking through the cracked glass of ...

    Nov 18, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Pointe2drama's will review :)

    Hey, Pointed, I remember you telling me that you'll review back. so here it goes! I'm the second one? =) LOL =))

    Nov 18, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: I Need to Review you! Puh-lease? O_o (OPEN)

    ALL DONE! =)) Except for Point's novel, and Roal's Chappie... =)))))

    Nov 18, 2010
  • Novel Workshop Re: deleted

    What happened and you deleted this?! O_o What would you feel when you review another chapter and happily looks for the thread and when you finally find the thread--it's deleted? ...

    Nov 18, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: YWS (parody of Y.M.C.A)

    I love this so much LOOOOOOOOOOOOOL I keep on laughing while I was singing to your words. LOL yeah, there could have been better word choice, but so what?! :lol: ...

    Nov 18, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Can You See Me? (Prologue)

    Hey, Unc. Nephew here to review as requested. I was supposed to review this yesterday, but I forgot which folder I saved it in. *sigh* Anyway, how’s it going? I ...

    Nov 18, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Fatal love

    Hey, Point! Here now as requested. First, the reviewers above have pointed out the nitpicks such as missing punctuations and mispellings, so I won't bother repeating them. I'll just tell ...

    Nov 17, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: My Hero

    Road! May I please request something before I continue my review? Can you please post it whole? I read that this is only the start. May I please read it ...

    Nov 17, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Lockets -- Chapter I

    TIGER RAWR! hahaha... Honestly, I love your review, I've even altered my manuscript! BUUUUT some were, I'm sorry, but if I followed your advices on Yuenish's PURPLE PROSE...well, my character ...

    Nov 15, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Munera - 1

    Hey, Bick. I'm back. =)) NITPICKS AND COMMENTS Correction. Pay attention. Better this way. >> A pack of rowdy young men always congregated outside them, and they enjoy ed throwing ...

    Nov 15, 2010
  • Other Re: The Lockets Book Trailer *NEW with screenshots*

    Hi Jash. That was chilling to watch. I hope your novels match the epicness of that trailer. You can't imagine the anticipation I'm feeling right now :3 - Jai YAO! ...

    Nov 15, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Do click on this topic, my red pen is impatient

    would you please check out my portfolio? have a bunch of poetry! XD

    Nov 14, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: My Hero

    ROADY! (haha I just gave you that weird nickname. so sorry, I'm not good with nicknames. =)) ) I'm here again! And thanks for the request! I'm excited to review ...

    Nov 14, 2010


Sometimes my life just sounds like surrealistic fiction being sold on clearance at the book store.
— J. G. Hammersmith