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Jashael

Jashael

  • Other Poetry Re: In The Storm

    He would never put me through something I can't do? Hey, Sol! Just a wee nitpick for you. Other than that, this was very simple and nice. ;) keep writing ...

    Nov 19, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Make me....I dare you

    Review please? =)))

    Nov 18, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Fire-bird chapters prologue and chapter 1

    Heyowww! Here as requested. Wait. Seriously, Pointe? This is it? O_O It's so short! Anyway, nitpicks in pink font. Prolouge: He stood there , looking through the cracked glass of ...

    Nov 18, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Pointe2drama's will review :)

    Hey, Pointed, I remember you telling me that you'll review back. so here it goes! I'm the second one? =) LOL =))

    Nov 18, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: I Need to Review you! Puh-lease? O_o (OPEN)

    ALL DONE! =)) Except for Point's novel, and Roal's Chappie... =)))))

    Nov 18, 2010
  • Novel Workshop Re: deleted

    What happened and you deleted this?! O_o What would you feel when you review another chapter and happily looks for the thread and when you finally find the thread--it's deleted? ...

    Nov 18, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: YWS (parody of Y.M.C.A)

    I love this so much LOOOOOOOOOOOOOL I keep on laughing while I was singing to your words. LOL yeah, there could have been better word choice, but so what?! :lol: ...

    Nov 18, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Can You See Me? (Prologue)

    Hey, Unc. Nephew here to review as requested. I was supposed to review this yesterday, but I forgot which folder I saved it in. *sigh* Anyway, how’s it going? I ...

    Nov 18, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Fatal love

    Hey, Point! Here now as requested. First, the reviewers above have pointed out the nitpicks such as missing punctuations and mispellings, so I won't bother repeating them. I'll just tell ...

    Nov 17, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: My Hero

    Road! May I please request something before I continue my review? Can you please post it whole? I read that this is only the start. May I please read it ...

    Nov 17, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Lockets -- Chapter I

    TIGER RAWR! hahaha... Honestly, I love your review, I've even altered my manuscript! BUUUUT some were, I'm sorry, but if I followed your advices on Yuenish's PURPLE PROSE...well, my character ...

    Nov 15, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Munera - 1

    Hey, Bick. I'm back. =)) NITPICKS AND COMMENTS Correction. Pay attention. Better this way. >> A pack of rowdy young men always congregated outside them, and they enjoy ed throwing ...

    Nov 15, 2010
  • Other Re: The Lockets Book Trailer *NEW with screenshots*

    Hi Jash. That was chilling to watch. I hope your novels match the epicness of that trailer. You can't imagine the anticipation I'm feeling right now :3 - Jai YAO! ...

    Nov 15, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Do click on this topic, my red pen is impatient

    would you please check out my portfolio? have a bunch of poetry! XD

    Nov 14, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: My Hero

    ROADY! (haha I just gave you that weird nickname. so sorry, I'm not good with nicknames. =)) ) I'm here again! And thanks for the request! I'm excited to review ...

    Nov 14, 2010


If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.
— Emily Dickinson