Jashael

Hello, Angela! Jash here as requested. =) I will divide my review into two parts as it will be easier for me, is that okay? This first post will contain ...

All I have to say is that the second stanza should be seriously squeezed to keep the flow. Anyway, the rhythm and rhyming were done well, I suppose. And there's ...

Hey Silent, as requested, I'm reviewing your poem and picking the one which is best for me. The others I have reviewed, so I don't think I'd be reviewing much. ...

Per, Robster and Jal done. I'll be getting to the others. Touch work, eh... XD Esp for SilentR...

Hey there! I'm Jash and here as requested! NITPICKS in pink. He didn't even have to look to know what it was : blood . Umm...that was it. LOL Okay, ...

I was meant to post this two days ago, but unfortunately, and obviously, I wasn't able to do so. Please understand why this seems so late. (Well, my character is ...

Hello there! Jash here for a random, short review. I have nothing to nitpick here, i.e. typos and such, but I do have a wee problem with the structure. I ...

Hey Cupicake, so I think that this was a bit short. And by that, I didn't mean the length but the poem's theme itself. It was like you didn't get ...

P.S. *likes

Hey there, Per! Jash here as requested. NITPICKS and COMMENTS will be in pink font. I met you first in a Christmas ornament. It was a peacock, of all non-Christmasy ...

Hey, Robster! I'm Jashy and I'm here to review as requested. =) Wow...this will be the first time I'll review a play (no one requests from me). I've read a ...

So I saw this featured. XD I'll get to it as soon as I can.

Aww MOM, WHO ARE THOSE?! XD um, I know Ryan. =))

I'm not into guys. No one can make me drool, but I'm adding to the list. LOL Define hot by the way. =) CHANNING TATUM CHACE CRAWFORD LUKE from Step ...

Temporarily closing. I'll re-open when I get to all of you. =))