Jashael

Yuriiko, that's "I had always brought in my bag..." and "mine in" meant to grope inside a cabinet. XD Sarreh 'bout those...I'll rephrase the others. Flow, Thanks for the comments! ...

Skinsy! Take yerr time. =)) Hey, Mom! Thanks so much for the early review. XD Oh, and I was writing this spontaneously last night (finally had time after weeks of ...

I've been trying to make this simple, so you may now conclude: yes, Snow's more slang; Sunshine loves purple prose. (LOL) I think, Tiggie, that's the way she is? Tell ...

Justin Beiber This wasn't fair. HP fans? In my building? My head throbbed in nuisance. Now I have the reason to hate that Roar-ling. I managed to stand up, holding ...

Hey there twin! Twin here to do a review. (LOL) This is random. Anyway, you probably have a feeling that I'm a total critic when it comes to lyrics. Guessed ...

~~Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ~~ Sallie (THE WOODS) I found myself walking in the woods--alone. I was ultimately hungry. I think it'd been an hour since I'd been lost, and I was simply famished. ...

Avighal Ya'sheal| Ziras Fields I shut my mouth after being reprimanded by the female elf. It was my fault I knew nothing that was taking place. I bit my lower ...

Hey, Silent. Here again for a review. Oh, I'm slow. Forgive me...have been really busy. Okay, to avoid confusion, nitpicks are pink, suggestions are blue. =) Nitpicks should be considered; ...

Hi, Skinso. I dropped by for a very quick review. I'll just point out a few nitpicks, and suggestions. =) I just remembered standing in the field, staring and t ...

Hi Fishy! I thought you were in India. :p

The fields were glittering under the sunshine now. Mother had just left me on my own, with creatures I did not meet before. I wished Mother stayed a bit longer ...

P.S. the only thing I didn't like was the gay part. I didn't find anything in it. I just felt like it was a blank space to fill up and ...

Hey, Skinso, as promised back in your page, I’m reviewing your story. =) I don’t know though if you’ve changed anything since the time I’ve saved this on my lappie-toppie, ...

This isn't facebook, Mom... HAHAHAHA kidding.

~~Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ~~ Sallie (THE WOODS) After hearing petty arguments in the helicopter and a man telling everyone "to shut up or else ...", I'd convinced myself to keep my mouth closed. ...